Very cool. I'd suggest increasing the contrast of the flowers on the back, just a TINYYY bit. Also the cracked style you have you could have it flow onto the shoulder a tiny bit too. The black area on the bottom left/mid of the picture is too much... you could strategically turn it into more white space, maybe crack it into the middle with your technique. However, I do not know if you want to go that abstract with it. I think it would work. Ok 13 words of la la la la la la la la la la la.
I really enjoy this pic. The falling flowers are so graceful and the hand gripping the arrow and fetching had me puzzled for a little while. It was a really awkward angle but then I noticed the sleeve was a different black. So its someone else. Perhaps just shot and falling as the main figure sweeps past. Perhaps someone holding flowers previously. Which makes me question...what did this unknown person do to incur the wrath of your subject..unless of course someone was shooting for your main subject and missed..At least those are the thoughts in my head.